Members 55fmj Posted November 16, 2013 Members Share Posted November 16, 2013 This is one of my original songs and it has been positive response around the area. Just thought I would share. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BlueStrat Posted November 16, 2013 Members Share Posted November 16, 2013 55fmj wrote: This is one of my original songs and it has been positive response around the area. Just thought I would share. I liked it for the first 90 seconds. Very Waylon-like. But it just screams for a bridge to break up the sameness of it. By the end, it's really repetitious. It could be a great song with some tweaks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members snoggin Posted November 16, 2013 Members Share Posted November 16, 2013 I agree. The verse and chorus are the same. The song needs a hook and maybe a guitar solo A bridge , a breakdown , something along those lines Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members TIMKEYS Posted November 16, 2013 Members Share Posted November 16, 2013 I think its a decent song. There is some merit to making some structural change but many songs kind of drone on that have been successful.. He has a great drummer. With a three piece its kind of a toss up as to how well a guitar solo works, If you can do it like a power trio band does things they work ,, If its a normal songs lots of times they get too thin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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