Members tbry Posted October 24, 2014 Members Share Posted October 24, 2014 You reckon lose the hand claps? I quite like them but willing to lose if others agree Also my friend reckons it's a bit lacking in the top end Sounds ok to me but I've heard it a million times now Maybe just turn the claps down? Well, let others confirm or disagree but it was distracting for me...turning it down would be a good start, but again, its your creation but after hearing many of your songs I don't often find things out of sorts but that bit of sound just didn't make the song better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted October 24, 2014 Author Members Share Posted October 24, 2014 Went back to without claps....and have to agree.... it is BETTER!! Thanks! link updated https://soundcloud.com/stickboy/never-again-a-new-song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LeonardScaper Posted October 25, 2014 Members Share Posted October 25, 2014 Coming in at the end just for a listen to my favorite artist. This song builds wonderfully. The harmonies at 1:48 send the tune soaring higher.......then that piano break. *applause* Fabulous ending. Sorry to not be more involved as much....I am deep into a project of my own. *wave* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bee3 Posted October 25, 2014 Members Share Posted October 25, 2014 Hey Stick... top notch. This is wonderful. I'm only listening on my laptop at the moment... and it translates pretty well... but, cymbals jump out as a little loud. I'll give a listen in my car later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted October 31, 2014 Author Members Share Posted October 31, 2014 Thanks Lenny. Mr Bee - did you decide the cymbals were ok.... they are a little loud but i think they sit ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bee3 Posted October 31, 2014 Members Share Posted October 31, 2014 Hey Stick. Listened again with headphones... and yes, they're sticking out, particularly the one that is panned more left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members pickyphone Posted October 31, 2014 Members Share Posted October 31, 2014 Thanks for the comments on the other song.... I will be looking into that at the weekend. Here is another one I quickly started last night. asian dating I have plenty of ideas for production so not really after comments on that....this is super rough with basic piano and a drum loop. The lyrics on the demo were kind of made up as I went along but I have some more updated lyrics below. free instagram followers Just got to write a bridge and possibly something a little more chorus like even though it sort of has one (the bridge may sort this) What are your thoughts? http://picosong.com/fjyv/ Never again Never again will this foolish heart Ever be broke….in two Never again Never again will this foolish heart Ever be broke….by you You tell me that the endings never change You tell me that the endings stay the same I should know better I don’t know why I let ya break my heart But I did So you did Never again Never again will this beaten/battered heart Ever be black…and blue Never again Never again will this beaten/battered heart Ever be bruised….by you You tell me that the endings never change You tell me that the endings stay the same I should know better I don’t know why I let ya break my heart But I did So you did Great! I love the lyrics, I will be listening to the link in a few minutes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted October 31, 2014 Author Members Share Posted October 31, 2014 Great! I love the lyrics, I will be listening to the link in a few minutes Cool! Make sure you listen to the soundcloud link as that picosong one is the early demo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members pickyphone Posted October 31, 2014 Members Share Posted October 31, 2014 Cool! Make sure you listen to the soundcloud link as that picosong one is the early demo! Just did! I really like it, playing it loud on my speakers Your voice is just awesome, everything just flows so well, you've definitely inspired me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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