Members Oswlek Posted September 17, 2014 Members Share Posted September 17, 2014 Lovely. I know it is often best to get to the chorus, but I missed there not being a second stanza of V2. The strings after the first chorus really hit home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bee3 Posted September 17, 2014 Author Members Share Posted September 17, 2014 Maybe you should turn it around, tell us that he digs her simple conversation. That seems kind of like putting her down. Maybe... You had my heart Right from the start When we settled into simple conversation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bee3 Posted September 17, 2014 Author Members Share Posted September 17, 2014 Lovely. I know it is often best to get to the chorus, but I missed there not being a second stanza of V2. The strings after the first chorus really hit home. And shift away from my standard method of writing as few lyrics as possible??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Marshal Posted October 1, 2014 Members Share Posted October 1, 2014 Very nice. I don't like the "As long as I can spend my time with someone who'll see things through" line as much as the rest. And: "Do what you like; It's all right" seems a little tired. But it moves by quickly. And the lightness of the tune belies the meatiness of the subject matter; a fun juxtaposition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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