Members Ramras Posted July 12, 2004 Members Share Posted July 12, 2004 I've got a new song up at: http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=3333&alid=-1 the song is Soothe. I know the ending is ubrupt, i'll be dealing with that. But any thoughts so far? Thanks for the input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members SirGarrote Posted July 12, 2004 Members Share Posted July 12, 2004 howdy. gave it a listen. i was diggin it up until the harpsichord thing came in....and i was like...what the....? then the tremelo line came in and i was liek....waht the....? then the drums picked up and i was like "wow, this is pretty cool." and towards the end i was diggin the harpsichord thing and the tremelo line and i couldnt imagine the song without them. so in hindsight, i like it definitely expand it out man....2 minutes is way too short. i know you said it ended abruptly: you werent kiddin! i kept thinking of a platform-style action game for the nintendo (not one inparticular....but just something like that). and i was picturing vibrant colors and happy kids playing this game. and then i started thinking that all was right in this videogame world. and i pictured a happy character passing happy trees....kind of like in a Bob Ross painting. konw what i mean? -G Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Boom Posted July 12, 2004 Members Share Posted July 12, 2004 I like the nice happy vibe. I'd like to hear more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Rauzi Posted July 12, 2004 Members Share Posted July 12, 2004 This song is pretty relaxing Just one thing though: try making it more dynamic and use some huge sweeps at the start instead. Now it sounds kind of dull at the start. Keep composin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Tai Mai Shus Posted July 12, 2004 Members Share Posted July 12, 2004 The opening pad reminds me a bit of twin peaks for some reason. (cheese machine maybe?) Surprisingly happy and playful track, it definatly will need an outro of some sort. But as you said your already on that. eric Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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