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Critique the first song I ever wrote!


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Everywhere I go

People stare at me

They look at my hair

And think what is wrong with me

 

Everywhere you go

People look your way

They smile and they glow

They don't know what to say

 

Cause I think we're meant to be

I'm strange, you're pretty

 

www.angelfire.com/ma/guardianworld/mp3/strangepretty.mp3

 

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Now really, how bad is this song? :)

 

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Originally posted by NervePoet

I'll have to wait to listen until I get home. Thy lyrics are simple, but very honest. I think everyone feels that way at one time or another.

 

Nerve, if you listen....be prepared to cringe. It's baaaaaaad, but funny. :)

 

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Is someone's hair reason enough to conclude strangeness? Is there a hairstyle that people in general would consider strange in 2002? If that's the only reason a person is strange, could they not also be boring and dull? I'm sorry, just not buying the premise of that situation.

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Originally posted by rickenvox

Is someone's hair reason enough to conclude strangeness? Is there a hairstyle that people in general would consider strange in 2002? If that's the only reason a person is strange, could they not also be boring and dull? I'm sorry, just not buying the premise of that situation.

 

Well, when you have yellow sideburns and purple spiked hair, people tend to stare and think you're strange. :) Of course, that was a long time ago...

 

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