Members falseaddiction Posted June 23, 2002 Members Share Posted June 23, 2002 i wrote this a few days ago...let me know how you like everything all around. I don't sing to much, but latley i have been wanting to. do you think i am good enough to sing in a band? let me know ...thanks The song is called Daylighthttp://pat.streetterror.com/justin/daylight.mp3 (acoustic version)get acoustic firsthttp://pat.streetterror.com/justin/daylight22.mp3 (electric version) Here are the lyrics: Daylight, could u wake me another time?Cause today I have nothing to live for.I thought I had it allI had so much more. Sunrise, the sun that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members falseaddiction Posted June 24, 2002 Author Members Share Posted June 24, 2002 pleeeeeeeeaseee comeone let me know what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members billyscorps86 Posted June 24, 2002 Members Share Posted June 24, 2002 well, i only DLed the acoustic version, but I'll give my feedback anyway... LYRICS - They're good. Now, there's nothing that really seperates them from anything else you would hear on the radio or on a lot of albums, but that's not neccesarily a bad thing. Maybe make it longer or change some parts for the purpose of adding a little more personal meaning to it? GUITAR - This is very good. Catchy and moving at the same time. If you recorded the guitar and vox at the same time, I'm doubly impressed. VOCALS - All right, you certainly have the potential to be a very good rock singer. One thing I didn't like about the song is that it sounds very much the same for a lot of it. To be completely blunt, it gets a little boring. It also bugged me that at some parts it sounded like you were really about to "get into" the singing, then drew back a little bit. As far as my opinion on whether or not you're ready to sing in a band... the way I see it, anyone who thinks they are ready to be in a band should go ahead and start a band. Work a little bit on making the parts of your songs more varied and don't be afraid to put your whole heart and soul (yeah i know it sounds corny) into your vocals and you'll do great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members glennboy Posted June 24, 2002 Members Share Posted June 24, 2002 "one more time at me." I would end the line on a higher note...>>>>>^^ know what I'm saying. The melody is too flat. Turn the lights out and sing like nobody is listening. -its real close and I like it. -g Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members negative sleep Posted June 25, 2002 Members Share Posted June 25, 2002 i like it, definitley could sing in a band. work on staying in tune better all of the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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