critique my lyrics

[IndyGuitarist]

(country-ish song)

 

wish as i may

wish as i might

have this first wish that I'm wishing tonight

 

I'd do anything

to be holding you

just like the first time when our love was brand new

 

(chorus)

I could close my eyes and just pretend

that your back here in my arms again

but there's no hope for me and you

no "let's talk it over" rendevouz

no "maybe we can give it one more try"

no love for me expressed or implied

and all the stars up in the sky won't give me

what I'm wishing tonight