Members Scott2k Posted July 1, 2002 Members Share Posted July 1, 2002 Hi everyone i got a few songs written and i am starting a band up. A couple of my mates who are joining the band wanna hear some of my tunes but I want some one elses view of my music b4 i show them, You know, just in case its crap. here is one of my tunes please feel free to critacise:- Ride On Warm summer nights and,lonley souls hold on,the shinning stars tonight,they keep your dreams alive, your trying the bestto do the best you can so, Ride on, Ride on, Ride On, summer days don't last and,lonley days will follow,the ghosts from your past,may leave you feeling hollow, your trying the best to do the best you can so, ride on, ride on, ride on. and they say what they say,but i don't really listen,those good old days,yeah how i really miss em, your trying the best to do the best you can so, ride on, ride on, ride on. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------Copyright Scott Jackson 2002 Thanks All Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cool_E Posted July 1, 2002 Members Share Posted July 1, 2002 looks like you were doing the chapter 4 exercise. Keep writing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Scott2k Posted July 1, 2002 Author Members Share Posted July 1, 2002 Thanks for the replychapter 4? is that when the structure is verse/chrous/verse/chorus/bridge/chorus? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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