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Chapter 5, Verse Development


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From Pat Pattison, Writing Better Lyrics

 

Here's one that I struggle with!

 

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Summary...

 

Pat starts out by stating that the basic rule

of songwriting is to keep your listeners interested

all the way through the song. Pat then goes through

some examples and analysis showing how verses

can be stale without new information presented.

Pat is basically saying that each verse should

add new information to keep the listener interested.

The new information also helps to give the chorus/refrain

more interest as each time it is heard with a different color,

provided by the verses.

 

Exercise:

 

Write three verses, each one ending with the

same line (call it a refrain). Each verse/refrain

system should advance the storyline to the next

place. Pat suggests that one way to approach

this is to move the story chronologically.

Do what ever you like, just make it move.

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