Members bstahler Posted July 9, 2002 Members Share Posted July 9, 2002 I have been looking at this board for a while, and can see that there are some fantastic writers out there. I just bought a guitar about a month ago, mostly to just jam with friends but also to do a little writing. I jotted this down, a while ago. A song about some friends I made starting a new job. Any feedback, hints, and helps would be greatly appreciated. Limousines and Fax Machines 10,000 miles above the earth, leaving behind the life that I had known. Behind me lay some big mistakes and some chances I just couldn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members JackSonic Posted July 11, 2002 Members Share Posted July 11, 2002 hated all the personal references. Take out all the "I"s and it'll be good enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Kingnome Posted July 11, 2002 Members Share Posted July 11, 2002 Is this a country song? It sounds like something someone would write for a songwriting seminar. I don't know if I like it or hate it. Somehow it seems too personal-- not very universal in concept, but then again, if you take out all the friends and limousines and Nashville references, I really liked alot of the other lyrics. Yeah, that's it. I liked the lyrics, but not the theme. Weird? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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