Members Serjical Posted July 10, 2002 Members Share Posted July 10, 2002 Some people were saying dark lyrics are easy to write, so I wrote some "catchy" lyrics, or atleast I tried. Keep in mind, I'm only thirteen, so take it easy if you wanna talk {censored}. But please make any suggestions. It Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Kingnome Posted July 10, 2002 Members Share Posted July 10, 2002 I like the "good scents" pun thing. That's the strength of this whole tune. Maybe something like: "I may have bad taste, but really good scents" or something like that. Lots of hook lines in this theme-- Down the drain-Squeaky clean-One hand washing the other-Don't drop the soap-etc..... 13 huh ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members thelonius74 Posted July 10, 2002 Members Share Posted July 10, 2002 not too bad at all actually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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