Members Deryck Posted July 31, 2002 Members Share Posted July 31, 2002 ...but with a few good lines. I wrote this last night, don't have a chorus or even a name.Imagine it with a Full Frontal Hurrican of Good Ol' Punk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Yeah Posted August 1, 2002 Members Share Posted August 1, 2002 I like it. It doesn't need a chorus, although you might want to vary the music abit from verse to verse...Overall I like... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Kingnome Posted August 1, 2002 Members Share Posted August 1, 2002 I like it, though it seems a little "inside". Maybe I'm underestimating the audience, but I think only someone who is keen on music and radio trends would "get" it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Deryck Posted August 1, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 1, 2002 Woh, cool, positive replys... The whole "Radio" thing is just the catch...the true thing the song's about is that you have to find the source of your anger and follow your dreams instead. I was thinking about another chorus in which this topic would be clearer, but it was to clich Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Kingnome Posted August 1, 2002 Members Share Posted August 1, 2002 For some reason after re-reading it, I'm reminded of a song called "Little Suzie's On The Up" by....., by..... I can't remember.-- Sounds nothing like what you described musically, though. Maybe if you added a bridge that more directly approached the topic?.......Just a suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members eagle1 Posted August 1, 2002 Members Share Posted August 1, 2002 Nice song there!!!! I heard an older song from Cranberries that tackled this same subject your song talks about. I think it's called Copycat or something and if that's not the song, it's in the same album.! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Deryck Posted August 2, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 Okay, again, last night, I checked the song another time, and I was thinking..."Mhhh, you could do this thing Everclear did with "So much for the Afterglow"..." The Refrain would change troughout the song, but it would always start like "This is a song..." The whole song would go like this: [Verse #1] Chorus: This a song about Music [Verse #2] Chorus: This is a song about business [Verse #3] Chorus: This is a song about Anna [Verse #4] Chorus: This is a song about AnnaOutro: This is a song about dreams Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Kingnome Posted August 2, 2002 Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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