Members RiffKing24 Posted August 1, 2002 Members Share Posted August 1, 2002 i wrote this song because their is this girl that i really like but she only sees me as a friend and i have watched other guys hurt her and... well just read it. it has a weird beginning to signify the fact that my world is weird. "she searches on" Father time,has lost his mind,ive fallen down another well,stuck ringing the old broken bell, a sound so clear,it leads to fear,another year,another tear,rolls down her cheek,a painful streak,of memories, fly through her mind,why can't she find,the answers to all her questions,there best left unanswered, Chorusshe searches on, and time goes by,the answers gone,her chance to fly,still she searches on,she searches on and on and onchorus i watch her as she cries,memory fades and dies,she sits alone,where the sun once shone,and she cries,and she cries,and she cries to me! chorus If only she knew,she was looking for me!I wish that I,that I could make her see! chorus 2x there it is diss away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MortalDecay1 Posted August 1, 2002 Members Share Posted August 1, 2002 Those lyrics suck ass. You should write lyrics about {censored}ing a chick in all 3 of her holes and {censored}ing her really hard. Then they might be interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Deryck Posted August 1, 2002 Members Share Posted August 1, 2002 What I like:----------------------------"a sound so clear,it leads to fear,another year,another tear,rolls down her cheek,a painful streak,of memories," --->That gives an image - and a good one, too! "fly through her mind,why can't she find,the answers to all her questions,there best left unanswered," ---> Some cool lines, but you'll get in trouble singing the two lines if you don't fit them in a great melody. "i watch her as she cries,memory fades and dies,she sits alone,where the sun once shone,and she cries,and she cries,and she cries to me!" ---> Also, cool lines. What I dislike:------------------------- The Chorus. Too clich Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members RiffKing24 Posted August 1, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 1, 2002 thanks for the compliment deryck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WattsUrizen Posted August 2, 2002 Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 If I had a dollar for every 'I wrote a song about this girl'... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WTF Posted August 2, 2002 Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 Originally posted by Anomandaris If I had a dollar for every 'I wrote a song about this girl'... god, i heard that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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