Members electricmel Posted August 2, 2002 Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 These came to me quick at first, then I started slowing down.There are a few specific places that I think need work...but I'd like to hear some (constructive)opinions first. The words are to a ssssssssllllllllllow acoustic thing. Sort of like Neil Young, Early Pink Floyd and Wayne Coyne sitting around a campfire eating mushrooms and trying to write a Joni Mitchell song. Here goes...thanks for any "help"! I washed it all awayCarried Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Kingnome Posted August 2, 2002 Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young. Now go record it so we can hear it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members RIN Posted August 2, 2002 Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 Originally posted by electricmel These came to me quick at first, then I started slowing down.There are a few specific places that I think need work...but I'd like to hear some (constructive)opinions first. The words are to a ssssssssllllllllllow acoustic thing. Sort of like Neil Young, Early Pink Floyd and Wayne Coyne sitting around a campfire eating mushrooms and trying to write a Joni Mitchell song. Here goes...thanks for any "help"! I washed it all awayCarried Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members electricmel Posted August 2, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 Thanks and um... BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bulldawgu812 Posted August 2, 2002 Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 those lyrics are awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members SDO Posted August 7, 2002 Members Share Posted August 7, 2002 i liked those lyrics a lot. stupendous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WattsUrizen Posted August 7, 2002 Members Share Posted August 7, 2002 The water theme disappears in the middle somewhere, is that intentional? Otherwise, really good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members electricmel Posted August 7, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 7, 2002 Wow!! Thanks for the kind responses. I think it was the italics. I don't know if I was going for the water theme as much as just daydreams of nature and "feelin' groovy" in general. Thanks again!!!! I am going to lock myself in my recording room and hash it out this weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ClusterOne Posted August 8, 2002 Members Share Posted August 8, 2002 I can see where you get the early floyd reference, the quiet nature-esque narrative put grantchester meadows to mind; Must say I'm impressed, they were quite good now that I look back over it, I see that it could actually fit perfectly into the tune of grantchester meadows sweet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members campaigner Posted August 12, 2002 Members Share Posted August 12, 2002 Cool.Carry on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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