Members cool_E Posted August 2, 2002 Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 hmmmm... This chapter is tough to summarize withoutusing the examples, and I'm much too lazyto type the whole thing in. Pat looks at using dialogue in a lyric. Hespecifically examines using different pointsof view to see which works for the examplehe's chosen. As Pat examines the lyric/dialoguere-written in different points of view heshows the problems associated with each. For the chosen example ("Give Me Wings"by Don Schlitz and Rhonda Kye Fleming)we end up in 3rd person narrative. Patis careful to tell us that this is not the solution for every lyric containingdialogue. Pat also foreshadows some of the work to becovered in upcoming chapters by looking atrhyme scheme & meter for the lyric thatwas examined. See you next time... (from "Writing Better Lyrics" by Pat Pattison) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Deryck Posted August 2, 2002 Members Share Posted August 2, 2002 "WBL" came with the mail today...cool...I'll checking it out later... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cool_E Posted August 5, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 5, 2002 Great Deryck. I can't wait to see some of yournew, improved lyrics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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