Members DarkPopToys Posted August 10, 2002 Members Share Posted August 10, 2002 Okay, here are a few songs I've been working on over and over for the past few months... Crystal Baller I close my eyes and I see a freakThink it's me and I'm afraid to speakSo I keep on going from week to weekThis way I didn't mind Dream of lives we could of had beforeHeaters broke down, open doorwaysFriends of yours will tell you moreWhat happens in your mind Oooo Oh oh Can we try and take the high road?Remember we were friendsI wanna be your Crystal BallerWanna show you everything good I like to make dreams in the afternoonAnd I've been tuned a little speak too soonWords that choked up in somebody's throatWhat happened to the time A foot note in your dance club daysIn my mind the record still playsStill wonder what the {censored} it saysI Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members DarkPopToys Posted August 11, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 11, 2002 No suggestions? How am I supposed to become a better songwriter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Lord Lucifer Posted August 12, 2002 Members Share Posted August 12, 2002 your lyrics are fine, not my kind of lyrics personally, but i think they are well written and get your point across very well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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