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[Riff]

OK, the mix is pretty lame...but tell me what you think of this song...

 

In the Eyes of Love

Words and Music by Brian Cheetham

 

Intro: D G A / D G A / G A / D Bm7 / G A D

 

D Em A D

Sometimes I think, ?bout where we?ve been.

Em A D

That trip to the ocean in your car was a funny way to begin.

G A Bm7 Em A D

Still, sometimes I think about it.

 

 

You ever think, ?bout where we?d be,

if things had not worked out for you and me?

I don?t know where I?d be for sure, but this for sure is true,

I?m a better man today because of you.

 

 

 

Chorus:

D G A

You looked at me with eyes that said this was meant to be.

D G A

You had faith in me more than I could believe.

G A D

You made me what I am today when you looked at me,

Bm7 G A D

you looked at me in the eyes of love.

 

 

Your eyes of love, your style and grace

They show through loud and clear, like that smile shining on your face.

 

And here we are, miles away

from where we started and still I think of it today.

Walking down that aisle I saw you, like a vision in my dreams.

Words can?t capture what it means.

 

[Chorus]

[myles loud]

nice stuff man !!!! sounds like you've got a winner there!!

 

might wanna change looked at me in the eyes of love..to looked at me thru the eyes of love...myles loud

[eagle1]

It looks good (I'm going to start to play it with my guitar now).

Although the chord progression seems like one that has been used a million times (trust me, I have like 3 songs with almost the same chords). But that's just the only thing I can think it is "bad" about it. Also, things change when the singer applies his voice (timing changes or whatever).