Members bulldawgu812 Posted August 12, 2002 Members Share Posted August 12, 2002 i took some time to write this song about a friend that is heading down the wrong road, but wont take any help from anyone that cares. and everyone i show is too positive about it. i need some real criticism. keep in mind it still needs a few parts added or taken away. It seems I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bulldawgu812 Posted August 13, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 13, 2002 here is the little bit of changes i have made already It seems I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bulldawgu812 Posted August 14, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 14, 2002 any comments please????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Horsehair Posted August 14, 2002 Members Share Posted August 14, 2002 You have talent, and your friends just want you to know they recognize it. I see it too, but since you asked, I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bulldawgu812 Posted August 15, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 15, 2002 well that is not the song structure... i simply stated the verse chorus and bridge and crap.... its not the order that it will be song in.. there will be chorus' repeating, and different stuff. thats just stating the first verse chorus etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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