Members Deryck Posted August 21, 2002 Members Share Posted August 21, 2002 ...it's called Death Of A Teenie Idol. I think I'm going ska with it. Have a seat, enjoy it, and leave some critique. Every night since many years she walks out on the stage While some teenage brats are jerking off to her page But thank god that's over now; it's not that we don't care It's just that we're so cynical and life just ain't fair! Tonight we celebrate the death of an teenie idol, baby Another victory for all the little bands Tonight we celebrate the defeat of pop music, baby Come on, we do the happy dance Finally it's over, there's ain't any blabla any more No more liying about rejection, or "I live Rock and Roll" Her albums were a musical Nineteen-Thirty-Nine She was one terrible disaster, a shame for the mankind! Tonight we celebrate the death of an teenie idol, baby Brothers, to the sun! We'll have a barbeque at her tombstone, baby Come on, It will be fun! Yeah, she acted innocent, but she was a hyppocrite Instead of pumping up the volume she pumped up her tits She sang about inner beauty and finding true romance While she had enough plastic in her to kill an elephant! Tonight we celebrate the death of a teenie idol, baby Come on, throw up your hands! Tonight we gonna get drunk together, baby I know this song doesn't makes much sense! Yeah, I know you wanna know how she passed away We would like to tell you, but we are not allowed to say The only thing we can say is that she won't get restord It's not that we ran out of rhmyes, but we got censored! Tonight we celebrate the death of a teenie idol, baby You don't have to shed these tears Tonight we celebrate another change in music, baby One, two, three, and CHEERS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mcflytrap Posted August 22, 2002 Members Share Posted August 22, 2002 You seem to not like teen pop! Hmmm...a few rhymes seem a bit forced (a problem most writers have to deal with sometimes), but overall it seems to be a fun little number. I'm not really a fan of lyrics of that kind, so my "critique" may not be completely fair to you. -mcfly- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Deryck Posted August 22, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 22, 2002 Mhhh...which rhymes do you mean?The last two lines in the last verse? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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