How is my voice?

[FunkmasterWWP]

i just want some critiquing....

 

http://members.telocity.com/gopsan11/1.mp3

 

 

critique the song if you wish too...its mine also.

[strat2]

The song has a nice feel to it.

 

Reminds me of guns and roses.

 

You have a good melodic sense vocally.

 

Voice character is good,definitly not a wierd style or texture.

 

So many people that are desastrous,think they sound good.

 

Lyrics good ,chorus needs pumped up a bit maybe take it

 

somewhere away from the root feel of the song , or keep it

 

and change the verses.

 

This song sounds to me like it needs to be screamed a little bit

 

maybe in the chorus.

 

Find your range and work on a scream style you can do without hurting yourself.

(what I mean here is push more air, raise your pitch not rediculessly ,maybe 2 or three full steps above the high notes you are currently hitting in the toone)Find an artist thats in your range, don't make my mistake and think your range is something its not.

 

Consult a vocal coach to make sure of this range and proper support.

 

And mainly , stay with it.

 

 

Ted

[veil]

your voice isn't bad but you can tell that you're lacking a bit of the ol' self confidence. you sound pretty young, too, not that it's bad. at first i thought i was listening to Guns 'N Roses covering "Lola."

[ShaneSelby]

What mic are you using to record vocals? Sounds like there is some low end problems on the verses due to you being to close to the mic when singing. It sounds like you are singing through one of those little PC mics. You might want to look into a decent mic/preamp/compressor combination. You have a cool sounding voice. Keep with it!