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Kind of a heavy acoustic, harmonized 'Alice In Chains' kind of thing. Feel free to help with some verses or whatnot.

 

The Title: "Dancin' On Quicksand"

 

The Chorus :

 

Hard work gets a deeper hole

Lose your life to save your soul

So hard to understand

You're dancin' on quicksand

 

....see? it needs a few more lyrics... :(

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Originally posted by Kingnome

Kind of a heavy acoustic, harmonized 'Alice In Chains' kind of thing. Feel free to help with some verses or whatnot.


The Title: "Dancin' On Quicksand"


The Chorus :


Hard work gets a deeper hole

Lose your life to save your soul

So hard to understand

You're dancin' on quicksand


....see? it needs a few more lyrics...
:(

 

Obviously.. lol

 

keep it up though.. ;)

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Hard work makes a deeper hole

Lose your life to save your soul

So hard to understand

You're dancin' on quicksand

 

 

Put some coins into the plate

Hope to buy a little grace

Or maybe to the package store

Dull the ache a little more

Cold days drag on bitter slow

The more hear the less you know...

 

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Hey, I'm only brainstorming...

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Originally posted by cool_E

Hard work makes a deeper hole

Lose your life to save your soul

So hard to understand

You're dancin' on quicksand



Put some coins into the plate

Hope to buy a little grace

Or maybe to the package store

Dull the ache a little more

Cold days drag on bitter slow

The more hear the less you know...


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Hey, I'm only brainstorming...

 

Hmmm... catholic?

 

Seriously.. not bad.. keep it up.. :)

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Originally posted by cool_E

Cold days drag on bitter slow

The more hear the less you know...

 

 

I'm getting inspired now !!!....

 

I think I was trying to describe that time before you realize that all your efforts to amuse yourself have been for nothing. Just killing time. "Everything is meaningless. A chasing after the wind"

 

 

.....or something......

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