Members confuseitall Posted March 5, 2004 Members Share Posted March 5, 2004 Hey there folks, I've recently joined the Soundclick community and have a couple songs posted. One of them is #18 in the rock unplugged chart... anyway, give me some feedback on there or here..... -brendan p.s. not to dissapoint, but I'm not really looking for feedback on recording quality....(this is the songwriting forum) http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/brendanleemusic.htm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members olddan Posted March 6, 2004 Members Share Posted March 6, 2004 LIstened to Civilization and Oblivion since they are the only two there. Oblivion was good but Civilization was outstanding. Outstanding arrangement. I liked the words but wish you had them typed out also. I definitely liked what I heard, but they went by to fast to fully digest. The little things going on in the background really add a bunch and the ebb and flow held my interest. Probably not top 40 material but an excellent song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members confuseitall Posted March 7, 2004 Author Members Share Posted March 7, 2004 Wow, thanks Dan! Your comments mean a lot to me. I should have more up soon and hopefully within the next couple months will have some better recorded versions as well. Here's the lyrics sheet: What would you do if armageddon rang your doorbell? would you scream if the world came crumbling down? What would you look like at the end of civilization? Would you call out for help? What if no one is gaurding the house above the moon? What if no one is watching the place where the sun lay down? What if no one is gaurding the house above the moon? What if no one is watching the place where the sun lay dying? Do you taste regret in every day you wake? Rinse your mouth to forget it all. Wash away, the sins of everyday, wash it down a bitter alchohol. When redemption finally finds you, would you trade any of it away? What if no one is gaurding the house above the moon? What if no one's watching the place where the sun lay down? ............... thanks again dan! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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