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First for some time by me. In the style of PJ Harvey these are.

 

The Coward's Way Out

 

Your beautiful eyes

Met with a face

A face of anger

A face of pain

 

Chorus

Do you remember our first kiss?

In the hills, in the skies

I'm taking the pills

You should be ashamed

 

My broken heart

Needs repairing

A beautiful ex

Makes me question why?

 

Chorus

 

Chorus 2

I remember what I missed

I remember where we kissed

I've taken the pills

I should be ashamed

 

The coward's way out

Met by the Devil

He torments me

Reminds me of you

 

Chorus

Chorus 2

 

The coward's way out

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fun stuff, I like to help with good lyrics. so here are my suggestions:

 

 

Your beautiful eyes

Met with a face

A face of anger

A face of pain

 

Chorus

Do you remember our first kiss?

In the hills, in the skies

I'm taking the pills

You should be ashamed

 

...3rd line= Im taking pills, I die inside

 

My broken heart

Needs repairing

A beautiful ex

Makes me question why?

 

4th line= I just push the pain away (something to that effect, just less of the shakespearean to be or not to be type of why god why ...same ole philosophy again)

 

Chorus

 

Chorus 2

I remember what I missed

I remember where we kissed

I've taken the pills

I should be ashamed

 

3rd line could be different as stated above

 

The coward's way out

Met by the Devil

He torments me

Reminds me of you

 

4th line - more twisted is even better = like all the things you did to me

 

 

Chorus

Chorus 2

 

The coward's way out

 

 

heh, pissed off hateful lyrics make me happy. thanks for the post, have fun!

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Originally posted by hardrocksinger

fun stuff, I like to help with good lyrics. so here are my suggestions:



Your beautiful eyes

Met with a face

A face of anger

A face of pain


Chorus

Do you remember our first kiss?

In the hills, in the skies

I'm taking the pills

You should be ashamed


...3rd line= Im taking pills, I die inside


My broken heart

Needs repairing

A beautiful ex

Makes me question why?


4th line= I just push the pain away (something to that effect, just less of the shakespearean to be or not to be type of why god why ...same ole philosophy again)


Chorus


Chorus 2

I remember what I missed

I remember where we kissed

I've taken the pills

I should be ashamed


3rd line could be different as stated above


The coward's way out

Met by the Devil

He torments me

Reminds me of you


4th line - more twisted is even better = like all the things you did to me



Chorus

Chorus 2


The coward's way out



heh, pissed off hateful lyrics make me happy. thanks for the post, have fun!

 

 

cheers BTW before you posted these comments I updated it anways:

 

 

THE COWARD'S WAY OUT

 

Your beautiful eyes

Met with a face

A face of anger

A face of pain

 

(Chorus)

Do you remember our first kiss?

In the hills, in the skies

I'm taking the pills

You should be ashamed

 

My broken heart

Needs repairing

A beautiful ex

Makes me question why?

 

(Chorus)

 

(Chorus 2)

I remember what I missed

I remember where we kissed

I've taken the pills

I should be ashamed

 

The coward's way out

Met by the Devil

He torments me

Reminds me of you

 

(Chorus

Chorus 2)

 

The coward's way out

 

(Bridge)

I cried too

And these heartless bastards

They ripped my heart out

Fed it to the witch

To boil in her potion of hate

 

(Chorus

Chorus 2)

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