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Her Love Rescued Me... Jo's Song


SteveE9C6

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Hey, Steve, I like this one--especially the pedal steel on the intro. The chord progression works really well. I can hear the lyrics a bit better on this one, but your vocals are still a little whispery. There's a very mellow vibe through the hole thing--kind of a AM Gold feel.

 

I still have a problem with your drums--in this case, the rim clicks during the verse are kind of loud and dry.

 

I like the lyrics to the bridge, but I'm not sure that the music part moves the song anywhere--there's a discussion on this forum about bridges that changed the way I looked at them, you might find it interesting.

 

Nice work!

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