Members rtristelune Posted January 6, 2007 Members Share Posted January 6, 2007 Our last song "Joey" is posted here: www.myspace.com/sixonecross The structure is not exactly definitive...so I am looking for some opinions about it please !What do you think overall about the song ? Thx Romain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Todzilla Posted January 7, 2007 Members Share Posted January 7, 2007 Decent song. Distorted vocal part sounds kind of wimpy and off key. I think if you're gonna go with heavily distorted vocals, they need to be way over the edge. That more than any element needs to be revisted. Really liked the breakdown around 2:50. Good build up. This is the best part of the song IMHO, in no small part for its absence of the distorted vocals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members VSpaceBoy Posted January 7, 2007 Members Share Posted January 7, 2007 I agree with the distorted vox, they are a bit distracting. I like the song, it sounds good to me. I do have a hard time understanding the vocals and the drums seem very dry and plain. Rock on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rtristelune Posted January 7, 2007 Author Members Share Posted January 7, 2007 Thanks for listening and for the feedback. You might be right saying the distorted vocals sound a bit clumsy or at least weird ! I think I have to find a better chorus for this song... About the drums, it is a sample I found. Caus' I am doing everything myself in my bedroom actually, but I have no drum set and I am no good drummer...so this is the secret of "dry and plain drums" !! The lyrics are the following: Just A Betty On A Page One More Beauty With The Rage Exhibition And Tentation, You're Just a Betty On a Page Joey Cass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Todzilla Posted January 7, 2007 Members Share Posted January 7, 2007 I think distorted vocals could still work, I just think the execution is not what it needs to be. I think the screaming is a little, how should I say it, ...tentative? When you scream, you need to really scream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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