Members mayht Posted February 10, 2007 Members Share Posted February 10, 2007 My first ever song I wrote. Wrote it last night in 15 minutes so I think it sucks Only asked for 10Thatll be that thenWalking outEmpty handedLooking in anticipationYour head dropsSorry to disappointLooks like its gonna beSmoke free That Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members HEPNOTIC Posted February 10, 2007 Members Share Posted February 10, 2007 not bad at all for a first song. keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members kavakavak Posted February 10, 2007 Members Share Posted February 10, 2007 It sounds cool and reads well man. With some revisions it could be sick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Chicken Monkey Posted February 10, 2007 Members Share Posted February 10, 2007 My first ever song I wrote. Wrote it last night in 15 minutes so I think it sucks Why don't you come back with something you like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mayht Posted February 10, 2007 Author Members Share Posted February 10, 2007 Thanks very much HEP and kava. Chicken, its not that I dont like it, its just I think you lot will think it sucks so yeah covering my back lol Nah not really just didnt think anyone would think it was good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Pythagoras Posted February 14, 2007 Members Share Posted February 14, 2007 Didnt you post this on the Ultimate Guitar forum a few days ago? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mayht Posted February 14, 2007 Author Members Share Posted February 14, 2007 Yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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