Members BondMan007 Posted August 3, 2007 Members Share Posted August 3, 2007 Sittin in the back of my yardFeeling my scarsAnd gazing the starsBeautiful nightAs I have perfect sight I look at the sky and watch the stars shineThey're beautiful, and they are divineIf only I had a wifeBut until then, this is the nightlife This is the nightlifeWhat could be better than looking at the stars?And having little things that are oursSitting outside and feeling the breesWith the beautiful wind blowing in from the trees Looking at the moonTalking to GodThat I'll have true love soonThat maybe someday we'll be like two peas in a pod Beautiful red rockets flying into the breezy airLeaving me no choice to lean foward and starePutting me feet on the clean grassEnjoying the nightlife very fast This is the nightlifeYes it isThis is certainly the highlifeThough I could use a kiss. This is the nightlifeYes it isYes it isYes it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mohr87 Posted August 3, 2007 Members Share Posted August 3, 2007 This is 10 times better then the previous songs I've read although I've never commented, however I feel the line "Enjoying the nightlife very fast" is an awkward statement, you also spread breeze as "brees" earlier in the song. Finally, its not really about a girl, but enjoying life even though you are single. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BondMan007 Posted August 3, 2007 Author Members Share Posted August 3, 2007 Thanks. I appreciate it. Yeah, I messed up with breeze, How is it awkward? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Dubb Posted August 3, 2007 Members Share Posted August 3, 2007 I think it's just a little awkward grammatically, it would most likely sound fine in a musical context. Nice lyrics, good use of imagery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members HEPNOTIC Posted August 3, 2007 Members Share Posted August 3, 2007 hope you sent the copyright forms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BondMan007 Posted August 3, 2007 Author Members Share Posted August 3, 2007 Seriously? You guys liked it that much? Or are you being sarcastic with me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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