Members nukeburn Posted August 14, 2007 Members Share Posted August 14, 2007 Hey, guys. First time here with one of those home-made half-finished demo mixes where sloppy guitars go out of tune and the drummer sometimes spawns an extra arm to hit that tom. But my question is about lyrics. English is not my mother tongue and what I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members DougH Posted August 17, 2007 Members Share Posted August 17, 2007 Ok, I will try this one. My grammar is not to good but I may be able to help a little if you are really really bad. Things seemed fine and work out with great recording. Good overall. I did notice the heaven would be better as "the heavens" or just "heaven" with out the "the" in front. My grammar is terrible, But this will help a little and I may have misheard. Maybe someone who is great with grammar and listening can help. I can't find much trouble with it other than this. Type out of the lyrics maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members nukeburn Posted August 18, 2007 Author Members Share Posted August 18, 2007 Thanks, DougH. Yeah, you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members DougH Posted August 18, 2007 Members Share Posted August 18, 2007 Thanks, DougH. Yeah, you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members nukeburn Posted August 18, 2007 Author Members Share Posted August 18, 2007 Pink paradise - LOL! Well, you never know when you go along with a porn movie Let's make it "would be like paradise". Can't stop laughing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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