Members Guitar Hack Posted January 13, 2008 Members Share Posted January 13, 2008 I just recorded a new song and am interested in what you think. It's a song about the human condition. I WILL DO A CRITIQUE FOR A CRITIQUE. Just put the address of your site/song in the response. Dance of the Blind. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=477036 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Guitar Hack Posted January 16, 2008 Author Members Share Posted January 16, 2008 I really would like your opinion on this song. Is the echo effective or should the vocal be straight up. What about the musical chorus. Does it need words? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Prosper00 Posted January 16, 2008 Members Share Posted January 16, 2008 I like the words, but I would leave the echo off of the vocals. I like the idea of keeping the song kind of simple, and the echo effect sounds kind of space-agey. And I would vote to put lyrics to the chorus - the modulation to the minor in the middle sounds kind of jarring without a melody on top to smooth it over. I like the bright acoustic sound you have going, is that a resonator? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Guitar Hack Posted January 16, 2008 Author Members Share Posted January 16, 2008 The guitar is a Blueridge BR-240 with an LR Baggs I-Beam pickup. Not bad for a Hog guitar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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