"The Wanderer", new song mix, looking for feedback

[Heckxx]

Hey all, I think I posted an earlier mix of thing song awhile ago, but I've completely overhauled the song and here is the result. It's still not completely finished, but I want to get some feedback/comments before I finalize ALL of my songs at the end of next week. I'm not even gonna bother posting this on soundclick/myspace, I'll just give a direct link, as you can see below:

 

The Wanderer, link!

 

 

 

Again, all comments/feedback are greatly appreciated. Thanks, and here are the lyrics:

 

 

 

When the wind blows, it will take me

To far away cliffs, and quiet cities

 

And up on the hills

The zephyr will cleanse

A thousand pounds of guilt

I look to the clouds

Their pale luminescence

And I scream so loud,

 

"What is a place, we call home?"

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