Lyric- A Warning

[JnAKers]

Idiomatic tendencies

Spell the end of our race

No one knowing what we say

No one caring anyway

Now the time that is here

Draining us to the bone

Even though we have no soul

Now pay the lessons that we owe

 

All things come back

There's no escape

Don't try and run from your fate

Just take a breathe and close your eyes

Take a step and caste your self into its lies

And just hope that the sensation lasts

For without its glory ,

There would be none of this

For life isn't living with out that kiss

That small sweet kiss of happiness

 

Its cruel, its kind to all who process

But it dies inside when shuttered out

Like a fly trapped inside a window

All who sense the feelings deep

Come talk to me, if your thinking pure

About tomorrow

And all in store

 

A warning though

For those who

mess with a dormant storms

don't not screw this head

For it shall charge you later down

So quick and cunning in its fall

And strike you

When you think no more

As it has done to survive

 

But also others no need to fear

For it senses character

for all who's near

And even though it may stay silent and

though Its thoughts may be deadly weapons

Its heart is calling, calling out

To find its home

Were it doesn't have to be alone

[tbry]

very nice write...it read in cadence and meter...I like this

 

 

 

Idiomatic tendencies Spell the end of our race No one knowing what we say No one caring anyway Now the time that is here Draining us to the bone Even though we have no soul Now pay the lessons that we owe All things come back There's no escape Don't try and run from your fate Just take a breathe and close your eyes Take a step and caste your self into its lies And just hope that the sensation lasts For without its glory , There would be none of this For life isn't living with out that kiss That small sweet kiss of happiness Its cruel, its kind to all who process But it dies inside when shuttered out Like a fly trapped inside a window All who sense the feelings deep Come talk to me, if your thinking pure About tomorrow And all in store A warning though For those who mess with a dormant storms don't not screw this head ...this line was confusing For it shall charge you later down ...and this one So quick and cunning in its fall And strike you When you think no more As it has done to survive But also others no need to fear For it senses character for all who's near And even though it may stay silent and though Its thoughts may be deadly weapons Its heart is calling, calling out To find its home Were it doesn't have to be alone

 

[JnAKers]

well in this line

"don't not screw this head..." i was trying to say that the head of the induival saying this was like a dormant storm

 

and "For it shall charge you later down" was saying how if you mess with his head that he will seek revenenge or payback on you

 

 

and thank you

glad you like it

[yollyp]

Nice if coupled with a melody. You have a good lyrics though

[JnAKers]

ill make a bass melody once i get my strings fixed

or just steal my dads gurtair for a couple days haha

oh and thank you