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its a cool song i really like it, i just have one thing to point out. am i the only one that thought it sounded really close to STP's interstate love song in the beginning? you might want to mix that up a little bit to avoid people associating it with an already big hit.

 

i particularly liked the distorted guitar riff and the way it flowed into the first verse, that had a cool vibe of kind of suspension.

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Hi all, hope everyone is doing good.

 

I just got back to this song. Recorded a new chorus. I think I may finally have it. I took a lot of the advice from this thread and tried to create a chorus with an actual hook and this one even has one of the words of the title in it :o. It was literally a spur of the moment thing, but I seem to like this one and hopefully I can put it to rest.

 

The OP link should still work. Thank You.

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