Members maddrummerdude Posted September 14, 2009 Members Share Posted September 14, 2009 Hello everyone Thankfully, I have had access to several pianos since I have been studying abroad. Therefore, I have been able to make more music. This song is called "Ring song." The song is here: http://www.myspace.com/colinkohtzistight Here are the lyrics: "Here's a thing that I want to sell Fished it out of a wishing well Can't complain 'cuz I've got it good Wanted more than I thought I should It's a rock that was someone's ring Packed and forged in a shining spring Bright as hell and white as a dove It's a mark of an ancient love Now it's mine and I want it gone Burning fingers with its sweet song Maybe bury it under trees Can you take it please, maybe please Oooooh, please." The song is about a guy who picks up a ring out of a wishing well, and finds out that it was a wedding ring owned by a couple hundreds of years ago who was in love. He tries to get rid of it, but he can't. Thanks for the feedback edit: After listening to this song with a somewhat unbiased ear, I don't think it is very good. I'm going to try to finish a new song and post it here instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members maddrummerdude Posted September 14, 2009 Author Members Share Posted September 14, 2009 Edit: If you hear people talking in the background, that's because I was watching the 49er game while I was recording. Hehhehe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Ontological Posted September 14, 2009 Members Share Posted September 14, 2009 Hey mdd, If I ever want to just chill out and relax I'd either put in Enya or your CD. Good job. Cheers,Deric Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members maddrummerdude Posted September 14, 2009 Author Members Share Posted September 14, 2009 Thanks man. I'm not very pleased with this song actually, now that I listen to it again. I feel like the last couple songs I've done have all been way too similar and slight. I'm working on a new one (which might get finished today) that I think isn't as twee and actually has some meat. If I finish it quickly enough, maybe I can change the focus of this thread to that song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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