Members willboes Posted March 16, 2010 Members Share Posted March 16, 2010 It's only just a demo, but I just want to hear some reactions to what I have so far. It's called "Still Out There." I'll post the lyrics below. You can listen to it here. Also, if you want to listen to any of my other songs that I have up, I'd love to hear some feedback on them. They're all pretty sloppy, but I'm planning on rerecording them soon. "Still Out There" I climb a tree to see far away, Hangin' on as it starts to sway. Leaves blow through an empty field, A lonely spot of land with no fruit to yield. If I can't seem to find her, At least I know she's still out there. If I can't seem to find her, At least I know she's still out there. Wind blows in a straight line, Pulls me home to a sadder time. Hold on, sweet love of mine, The walk is long, but my legs are fine. If I can't seem to find her, At least I know she's still out there. If I can't seem to find her, At least I know she's still out there. Out there alone, Out there alone, Out there alone. Since music be the food of love, I still play on with the stars above, And even if I see push come to shove, I know I belong to the one I think of. If I can't seem to find her, At least I know she's still out there. If I can't seem to find her, At least I know she's still out there. If I can't seem to find her, At least I know she's still out there. If I can't seem to find her, At least I know she's still out there. Out there alone, Out there alone, Out there alone... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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