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This has a lot going for it...the lyric is hard to comment on without it posted...all in all its good, but some variation or a step up for a change might help too.



Thanks! I forgot to post the lyrics. There aint a whole lot. Just a couple of verses repeated a few times.


I'm feeling empty

Hollow within

Just wanted the chance to

to see you again


the love we have is


the presence of you

sets me free


I got a deep burn

in my soul

it's getting deeper



(and then repeat)

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