Members shreddhappy27 Posted February 7, 2012 Members Share Posted February 7, 2012 I just started writing songs last year. This was among the first few. It's about missing someone close to you. [video=youtube;4pcPVTochIQ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members tbry Posted February 8, 2012 Members Share Posted February 8, 2012 This has a lot going for it...the lyric is hard to comment on without it posted...all in all its good, but some variation or a step up for a change might help too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members shreddhappy27 Posted February 8, 2012 Author Members Share Posted February 8, 2012 This has a lot going for it...the lyric is hard to comment on without it posted...all in all its good, but some variation or a step up for a change might help too. Thanks! I forgot to post the lyrics. There aint a whole lot. Just a couple of verses repeated a few times. I'm feeling emptyHollow withinJust wanted the chance toto see you again the love we have iseternallythe presence of yousets me free I got a deep burnin my soulit's getting deeperuncontrolled (and then repeat) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members tbry Posted February 8, 2012 Members Share Posted February 8, 2012 I got a deep burnin my soulit's getting deeperuncontrolled I like this...uncontrolled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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