Members unk0wn Posted February 26, 2012 Members Share Posted February 26, 2012 Hey guys I'm working on a tune called Lesions and I need some critiques. It gets pretty crazy at the end. Thanks! http://soundcloud.com/bbqtriangle/lesions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Oswlek Posted February 27, 2012 Members Share Posted February 27, 2012 What help are you looking for? I like the lead work and that spacey bit at the end of the chorus(?), but without some direction as for as what you want help on or the lyrics posted it is hard to offer much help. The crazy part at the end was my favorite, BTW. Strong interaction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Adidas-25 Posted March 2, 2012 Members Share Posted March 2, 2012 Great song, I enjoyed it much! Amazing solos there! "Thumbs up" =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Sandy Cheeks Posted March 2, 2012 Members Share Posted March 2, 2012 Lesions? Not the best song name I've heard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members unk0wn Posted March 3, 2012 Author Members Share Posted March 3, 2012 Thanks guys! Yeah the song title is a work in progress as well. I'm mainly looking for suggestions and critique on the mixing/different parts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rickidoo Posted March 4, 2012 Members Share Posted March 4, 2012 Hi Unknown, Here are my mixing/songwriting thoughts per your request. 1. I'm not a big fan of going so long without kicking that bass in. It might give the impression (to the casual listener) that the song is rather thin, when it is really not. If you want to do the "no-bass then bass" thing (which I have been guilty of doing myself), recommend keep it shorter, of use it for shock value in the middle of the song. 2. I really like when you kick in teh "ohss..." I wasn't expecting it, and even though I know its artificial it was a cool curve to have thrown. Liked it much. 3. You really build this song instrumentally into a "wow". There's a lot going around the 75% point, but it still manages to keep my interest and my sanity. 4. You then bring it down a few notches just before the end with some orchestra strings. You do it in a superb way. I'm jealous. You obviously know what you are doing there. 5. I liked the melody of the vocals. I felt that the vocals themselves were just a tad to low in the mix and I had to concentrate to make them out. To me, I'd up them a nudge. GREAT ORCHESTRATION in this song. A standout. Rick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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