Members Leon1242 Posted July 25, 2011 Members Share Posted July 25, 2011 I tried adding like a raspy-ish type of feel. like some parts of it I like, but some parts i know im pitchy and off key, but can you guys tell me some criticism to help me sing songs like this better? I really would like some tips, thanks! Please dont ban me from your ears forever after listening to this! xD I know its not great, and actually in my opinion its pretty far from good. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xio6WxDFynI Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted July 25, 2011 Moderators Share Posted July 25, 2011 To be honest, I think the rasp is throwing off your pitch control. And your tone seems to suffer from it as well. I'm by no means a 'rasp expert', just saying what I hear. Btw, I liked your 'Unwell' cover much more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cjpbarboza Posted July 25, 2011 Members Share Posted July 25, 2011 well i agree with davie your rasp need more control, that is affecting your pitch, you are off key several time, but i think that is because your rasp, but that is nothing that you cant improve, just try to find exercise of making a good rasp and be more focus about your pitch good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted July 25, 2011 Author Members Share Posted July 25, 2011 well i agree with davie your rasp need more control, that is affecting your pitch, you are off key several time, but i think that is because your rasp, but that is nothing that you cant improve, just try to find exercise of making a good rasp and be more focus about your pitch good luck Hmm, thanks CJ. Ill try and work on the rasp alittle bit more. And maybe if I get annoyed, ill go back to singing in a clean tone lol. Thanks guys for the tips. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jersey Jack Posted July 25, 2011 Members Share Posted July 25, 2011 Not bad at all. Just back off a little bit on the rasp and hone in on the pitch; once you nail that you can bring back the rasp. By the way, you sound just like Conor Oberst! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted July 25, 2011 Author Members Share Posted July 25, 2011 Not bad at all. Just back off a little bit on the rasp and hone in on the pitch; once you nail that you can bring back the rasp.By the way, you sound just like Conor Oberst! Thanks Jersey. When you said I sounded like Conor Oberst, i decided to look him up. Best decision I ever made, i like his music now haha. Thanks man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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