Members Leon1242 Posted May 20, 2011 Members Share Posted May 20, 2011 Hey guys, first off, i bought a pop filter, so things shouldn't sound AS PAINFUL, but I still have a horrible mic, so its not perfect, or even close to perfect, but theres some changes, like my vocals being noticable, lol. Tell me what you guys thought. Haaaapppyface. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ihoOokVLZu8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cjpbarboza Posted May 21, 2011 Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 i lioke you voice is relaxing, very pure, but something you sound off key whatever i like the cover, even you should work in you breath, but i still like you voice good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted May 21, 2011 Author Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 Thanks buddy, and breathing...how do I go about that? o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cjpbarboza Posted May 21, 2011 Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 you breathing is ok but something example is the high notes you sound a little strained Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted May 21, 2011 Author Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 Oh, ive noticed that one, how do I fix that though? Any tips? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cjpbarboza Posted May 21, 2011 Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 i dont know how to explain you here my english is not so good. i will try first you need to relax yourself meanwhile you sing nothing mather, only sing ok?try to take a deep breath and fill you diaphragm for 5 seconds, then take the air for 5 second, and exhale for 5 secondsmake this like 6 or 7 times and you will can control your breathing more sorry if you didnt understand im working on my english LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jersey Jack Posted May 21, 2011 Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 I can hear that the microphone isn't great--very lo-fi, which doesn't work in this tune. But you have to use what you have, so.... You also have some significant pitch problems, I'm afraid, but nothing that can't be fixed. When you do get a groove going, you sound very good, so there's no question that you can nail this stuff if you work on it. I would go through the melody using a piano or a guitar to provide guide notes; really focus on nailing the notes. In a week or so I'd bet that you'll be dramatically better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted May 21, 2011 Author Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 Might help if I did my warm ups before singing, wouldnt it? lol. Thanks Jersey, ill definetly take up your criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cjpbarboza Posted May 21, 2011 Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 of course you cant star sing without warning up first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted May 21, 2011 Author Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 of course you cant star sing without warning up first Oh yeah and Barboza, Thanks for your input also! your english is easily readable to me! > lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members beach1 Posted May 21, 2011 Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 I think you have a really nice voice. There's a sense of sensitivity and sentimentality or something in it that I like. Yeah, there were some pitch issues throughout, but nothing that seemed too serious, I think. Something to work on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted May 21, 2011 Author Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 Thanks to you also Beach. ill be sure to keep posting more up, im working on plenty more, but im going to try replacing my mic first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cjpbarboza Posted May 21, 2011 Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 you can use adobe audition to delete the noise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted May 21, 2011 Moderators Share Posted May 21, 2011 Thanks to you also Beach. ill be sure to keep posting more up, im working on plenty more, but im going to try replacing my mic first. Yes! Do that! lol I don't like critiquing low-fi recordings. Because most of the time it doesn't the voice justice. Sounds muffled and not properly leveled in volume. Though from what I can her, your voice sounds kinda 'shakey'. Maybe a breath issue. You should concentrate on breathing exercises. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members beach1 Posted May 21, 2011 Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 Thanks to you also Beach. ill be sure to keep posting more up, im working on plenty more, but im going to try replacing my mic first. Oh, good. Like davie said, it'll sound MUCH better with a better mic and better sound quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted May 22, 2011 Author Members Share Posted May 22, 2011 Thanks again guys for your input, i love this community, nobody here is very harsh with the criticism, i like it alot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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