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Hi I posted this before but didn't really get much response so please help me out! My band have just started and we have put two songs online, we think they are REALLY good but please have a look at them and leave a message on here or the site guest book, particularly the song "GET AWAY" here's the link.. I hope you have a look.

 

www.onlinerock.com/musicians/silverspeeder

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Its upbeat, I like that. It could be faster.

Vocals sound weak That was reall mean I know but I think if you sped up the tempo it would change how the song gets sung and would have a little more edge and hook.

 

Less YeahYeah Yeah's.= annoying!

Is this a drum machine? Because if it's not you need to get new drummer.

 

Try putting some GROWEL to the vocals.

 

Overall, I think it could be a good song, just do it in way that prooves you have hair on your balls!

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