Members randallnm Posted March 19, 2003 Members Share Posted March 19, 2003 Snow Would Melt- words and music by Nick Randall I wish the snow would melt but then we all might drown We could build a boat and sail it on the sea. Try our best to make promises For a new society Built a fire on a mountaintop So we could see the country lines But waves erased the latitudes That governed our Design On this rock, let the waters rise As we all are climbing down It's a terrible compromise, It's freezing again, and starting to snow. Building houses from the things we've got: Some shoelace and some string. Shingles made from credit cards And other fancy things. Gather food while playing war, It's a shady game of cards. No more TV and gasoline, But it's not too late to start. On this rock, let the waters rise As we all are climbing down It's a terrible compromise, It's freezing again, and starting to snow. Some of us will swim away and others still will drown. Some of us will try to stay, But bury our promises in the ground. Heaven's city lights (the only lights we have), Cast illuminated darkness on the shore. Constellations are memories Of being here before. On this rock, let the waters rise As we all are climbing down It's a terrible compromise, It's freezing again, and starting to snow. Rip it to shreds, this is my first song and I need some input! You can hear it at www.mp3.com/nickrandall thanks!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members randallnm Posted March 20, 2003 Author Members Share Posted March 20, 2003 pleeeeeease? I'ts my first try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Deryck Posted March 20, 2003 Members Share Posted March 20, 2003 It's "gasoline", but otherwise's pretty sweet...and welcome to this board. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Taylorman Posted March 21, 2003 Members Share Posted March 21, 2003 I really like the theme. Vague, but not excessively so. Intersting writing style you have there; pretty individual. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members thewallrules Posted March 27, 2003 Members Share Posted March 27, 2003 heh i've been writing songs for about a year and a half and i'm only now to about the same point you start at- your good you crazy bastard, good indeed I DIG IT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Addammer Posted March 28, 2003 Members Share Posted March 28, 2003 YOU SUCK your way to good at this... mind sharing some of your talent with me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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