Members Fat_Sachel Posted November 27, 2003 Members Share Posted November 27, 2003 This is what Im recording at the moment. Its slow and the phrasing is spaced out a bit in each line. The ooohhh in the chorus is held out for a long time. Some may say its vague and I spose it is on paper...What Ive got in mind for production will thresh out the story slightly more...I think its there if you use your imagination. Anyways, let me know what you think... Reasonable doubt I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members confuseitall Posted November 28, 2003 Members Share Posted November 28, 2003 I like the contrast between the verse and chorus "ooooh what's wrong with me? Nothing's wrong with me" who is 'her' you don't mention her till the end which is a bit confusing.... i like it , good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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