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Critique the arrangements plz


mulch

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OK, these are not really my genres, so take this with a grain of salt. Overall, thumbs up. Below are minor nitpicks:

 

Kojak - I liked everything except:

 

1) The lead guitar gets too busy for my tastes. It sounds like you're more into the guitarwork than the music that's supporting it. If you were playing live I might think you weren't really listening .

 

2) The synthy bass stuff towards the end. The vibrato is out of sync with the rhythm section. If that's a stylistic choice, fine, but for me that's distracting.

 

Prelude-Ride Into:

 

I like the contracted measure stuff. I think you could exploit that more, somehow.

 

In the "acoustic" guitar break, it'd be nice if, when the distorted guitar folds in, it doesn't ape the line, but plays harmony or counterpoint.

 

Again, all in all, good stuff!

-mtVessel

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