Members negative sleep Posted January 31, 2006 Members Share Posted January 31, 2006 please read...and reflect... songs called haoma look around and aroundnothing to see here nowno one but me here nowalways here, there but how you can see, so plainlyeveryones gone homeslaves to the old drone im not listeninganymore, to anyonewho looks like heri dont want no trouble hereto say the least, im sick from all of it winters shame can only blame the frost of its dissentand we can only capture those we truly do resent poisoned fruit tastes just as sweetif not for one, for two to splitif he dont carejust be awareof everywhereand everythingand everyoneexcept the kingexcept the sonand who he brings remember,stillwhile the moon is outjust what it is that we're aboutshut your mouth and your pig snoutfill buckets with rain from clouds of doubt i wander the earth, consumed by shame;carrying a ball and chainwith my initials carved the samelisted below the other namesof those who paid their time and dueslearning what its like to lose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Chicken Monkey Posted January 31, 2006 Members Share Posted January 31, 2006 poisoned fruit tastes just as sweet is very good. shut your mouth and your pig snoutfill buckets with rain from clouds of doubt is not so good. Your structure is questionable, and there are a lot of cliche's you need to cut out, but I think there's a good song in there somewhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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