Please check out my songs

Hello, I have been away from here for awhile and away from music for even longer. Please check out some of my songs and tell me what you think. Be honest cause I have my medication and my Therapist on stand-by and I can take it. Thanks in advance.

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Just wanted you to know. I have been posting here for about 4 years but have fell victim to the lost posts.

Nice vokal on the Welcome Home. Very Pink Floyd in the beginning.

the first one is really pinkish floydish. I did not follow all of it.

? liked the"hiding" the most.its very strong,neatly and vigorously arranged.the beat is very interesting.positioning the bass in the centre would be better 8if there is one).

the third one is slightly getting monotonous towards the end.putting some kick and tom would be nice in those parts.? liked it.

? liked the last one too,although it did not hit me as morbid as you

you intended.the vocal in the first chorus could be more melodic, ? guess.

? did not understand half of what you said,but thats something ? do not normally "hear" in music, but ? hope they are proportionate

to what you musically have.

you have atchieved a strong interesting sound without the help of aa electric guitar which is normally used to strengthen sound.

? liked your acoustic playing too.

Originally posted by Blucifer Hazelnut Nice vokal on the Welcome Home. Very Pink Floyd in the beginning.

Thanks for the reply. I totally ripped them off but I guess everything in music is borrowed from someone else.

Originally posted by janusmanus the first one is really pinkish floydish. I did not follow all of it. ? liked the"hiding" the most.its very strong,neatly and vigorously arranged.the beat is very interesting.positioning the bass in the centre would be better 8if there is one). the third one is slightly getting monotonous towards the end.putting some kick and tom would be nice in those parts.? liked it. ? liked the last one too,although it did not hit me as morbid as you you intended.the vocal in the first chorus could be more melodic, ? guess. ? did not understand half of what you said,but thats something ? do not normally "hear" in music, but ? hope they are proportionate to what you musically have. you have atchieved a strong interesting sound without the help of aa electric guitar which is normally used to strengthen sound. ? liked your acoustic playing too.

Thanks a lot for your comments. You are right, the third song could use some other percussion. I tried to stick to hand percussion and you would not believe some of the percussion I used. Let's just say , they can be found in any house. Don'r worry about not understanding half of what I say as I don't understand 3/4 of what I say. Thanks again for listening.