New song....very different for me.. opinions if you have a few mins?

Hello

Wrote and recorded this today

Its a bit unusual compared to my normal stuff

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9097209

Foundations

For your hand to be with mine

I know we'll be happy come the summer

A spoken word a silent sigh

Bow down to the one that makes you better

How to break a heart of stone

Just one kiss upon your cheek will shatter buildings

Tumble down onto the floor

These foundations aren't as strong as we expected

A simple song a melody

I would play you a sonnet if you wanted

An orchestra a raging sea

These sound waves will rattle you like thunder

How to break a heart of stone

Just one kiss upon your cheek will shatter buildings

Tumble down onto the floor

These foundations aren't as strong as we expected

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You established your musical and lyrical sensibilities quite well some time ago with some pretty cool pop stuff.....I have always looked forward to your new material.

I believe I commented on your last posting that you were subtly moving in a different direction. With this tune you are obviously building some new and interesting musical structures on a foundation that is already quite strong.

ha thanks man

i think i may stay away from this style (if i can only find my old style again!!) i just fancied getting something out and this is what appeared

A little rough... a little weird...but i had fun along the way

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