Looking for some (constructive) criticism

Alright, first things first. I've only been playing drums since mid January '08, and I should practice a ton more, and I realize alot of mistakes and off beats/poor timing in my drumming on this track. The guitar quality seems kind of low, but I will be adding more layers of guitar for some more depth, and it doesn't seem like the bass becomes very prominent until after the interlude at around 4:19.

This song is suppose to drone out, and I tried to keep the drums fairly simple and within my (lack of) ability. The song isn't done of course, aside from needing more guitar depth, a re-recording of the drums, it will eventually gets vocals when everything else is taken care of. So I'm looking for any advice at all, aside from people just saying to keep practicing. Maybe there are some parts I could structure differantly with the drums, a component I am missing and should try to incorperate.

http://bitterdawn.metalhordes.com/

It's the very last track at the bottom, the second "Urn" track. Nevermind the other songs, most of those are going to be pulled and new stuff will be written and recorded with mics, real drums, etc. etc.

Thanks guys.

You are doing good for only a couple of months man, keep it up....

I can lend some constructive criticism, nail your crash hits on kick drum hits or snare hits. Practice practice practice. Really good job only playing since January..

Thanks man. I'm not really sure what the correct way to coordinate things is, but before I was connecting the two crash hits in the verse with two timed kicks. Generally I know what I want but my capabilities haven't quite reached my goals, especially since I'm struggling with getting the double bass down.

Thanks much for your input and giving this a listen, and I'll definitely focus more on practicing.