First time showing an original song (guitar and voice) I'd love any kind of feedback!

It feels weird putting an original up here... maybe it's because I've never shown any of my original songs to anyone, haha.

Please leave me any type of feedback!

This song is called "Ripen" for now... I couldn't think of a better title. Haha anyways, I wrote it for/about a girl I liked all year. I wrote the lyrics a while ago and tried to piece them together for this video.

Once again, I'd love any kind of feedback