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  1. Originally posted by MrKnobs


    I haven't decided, I have a couple of ideas. The best title I've come up with so far, which is the point of the piece, is too revealing of the ending, which was a surprise in real life and should be here as well.

    I'm literally writing this just as it flows from memory, no outline, no plan. I've had to go back and do some slight edits in the earlier chapters for continuity. I actually hadn't planned to write more than the first segment.

    It's important to think of this as a first draft, because that's what it is.

    Terry D.
    Witches call their animal companions "familiars". I think that term applies so far--perhaps you call your novel "The Familiars".
  2. Originally posted by dissonance
    I swear I've read that Sandy/Candy story before. Have you written about it before because I'm sure I've heard it.

    The part about Janis sounded a little familiar too but not enough to say I'm sure I've heard it before like the Sandy/Candy part.
    Sandy and Candy have shown up in the Stupid Stories in the LS&P forum.
  3. ...so one time I was busy banging this chick in some hick Texas town and this big dude with long hair came in to her house asking her roommate where the girl was that I was busy with and it really pissed me off 'cause I had already paid her up front.

    Anyway, she told me to f-ck off since I couldn't get erect anyway and I said I wanted my money back but she screamed at me to leave. So I took a couple of joints off her bedside table and left while trying top pull my pants up.

    The next guy seemed alright, and came out on the porch asking if I was alright. I told him everything was cool, but the problem was with those two hookers in the run down house. We lit up a couple of joints and then I left.

    I wonder whatever happend to that long haired freaky guy..?


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  4. Originally posted by DonaldDemon


    Most people at original places are lame and don't dance.
    You can't dance to a song you've never heard before.

    If you want dancers you almost HAVE to have some covers to do. If you refuse to play covers exactly as they appear in recordings, then take the lyrics from some popular song and rewrite the melody to make it your own. It's worked for bands from The Rolling Stones to Marilyn Manson.
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