Members SergioLeone Posted September 18, 2011 Members Share Posted September 18, 2011 I recorded this song based on Bob Dylan's song I'm not there (I was inspired by it's tempo and melody but the lyrics are my own). http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EG6bhTgOC3g&feature=related I have a few pronunciation (or perhaps enunciation would be more correct). I wasn't actively trying to sing in head voice but I would guess it sounds more in head voice? It sounds a bit weak. Please let me know what you think about the singing? Any thoughts on how to improve? Take care! http://www.box.net/shared/gjru12rqtv1es6celv3o Lyrics: Morrocon Pie and her hair waves wildly in the windlike the sails, of a ship in a storm that hailsits arrival on the shore and i wanna get tangled and lost in that messwhich hangs loose past her collarbone and looksas thin as her dress and the mattresses are thin, and the floor is coldbut she keeps me warm through the night and keeps at bay of what's in store and i'm drenched in her fear, cause i kept her close at nightand it tastes like the broken plight of lonely childrens' sighs and i cry clutching my pillow like a childcause i miss, how her gown would brush against the floorof my helplessness my ghost-hearted mistress she now lives in my tongueshe won't do me no wrong she won't do me no harm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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