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  • WIP - I am going to shorten the arrangement / looking for feedback

    It's still a rough mix and draft - I am not quite happy with the arrangement either (it needs trimming back) and that voice sample is being removed also.

    Kind of instrumental nuJazz / electronic / idm hybrid - which is pretty much what I do.



    Track is titled "The Emperors New Rhodes"



    Any arrangement feed back appreciated - I have the mixing / production side of things covered though.



    https://soundcloud.com/venndiagram/e...odes-wip-rough



    If I can wrangle it into shape it will appear on an album slated for late January / Early Feb release.
    Venn Diagram - Artist WebsiteMachinedrum, Monomachine, Analog Four, Octatrack, NordModular, Moog SubPhatty, Novation Nova, Korg MS20 Mini, Maschine, Tassman, Aalto, Absynth, Uhe's ACE & AudulusContact

  • #2
    So... not really my style of music, so I'm not sure I can offer anything constructive. I will say that it sounds good... it's cool... movie soundtrack kind of stuff. Personally... I'd approach it with a bit more structure... maybe a motif of some sort to bring the listener to a familiar place.

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    • #3
      Sorry to say that I lost the will to listen half way through the track.

      I'm a bit of a structure junkie and don't relate very well to free-form sonic experimental stuff whether its electronic or real instrument.

      Hopefully you'll get some feedback from someone who engages with this form of music.
      'Music is your own experience, your thoughts, your wisdom. If you don't live it, it won't come out of your horn'.
      CHARLIE PARKER

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      • #4
        The arrangement needs tightening up but it is far from unstructured and free-form.

        It certainly isn't my concept of free-form thats for sure.
        Venn Diagram - Artist WebsiteMachinedrum, Monomachine, Analog Four, Octatrack, NordModular, Moog SubPhatty, Novation Nova, Korg MS20 Mini, Maschine, Tassman, Aalto, Absynth, Uhe's ACE & AudulusContact

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